犯罪类 + 传媒类：
Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Other says they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 电影和游戏中的暴力元素很流行，有人认为暴力元素对于社会有不良影响，有人认为看暴力电影和玩暴力游戏仅仅是无害的娱乐，讨论两种观点，再给出你的结论. (2011年10月29日)
相关题目：
Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人建议对于报纸和电视上犯罪细节(暴力信息，色情)的描述应该加以限制，你在多大程度上同意这个观点?
讨论两种观点话题解析：
提问标志：Discuss both sides and give your own opinion ? Discuss these views and give your opinion?
作家立场：政府应该限制传媒中的暴力信息，我支持传媒审查。
谋篇布局：
首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点+ 作家立场
二段：正方观点的合理性以及展开(3个分论点)
三段：反方观点的合理性以及展开(2个分论点)
尾段： 再次亮出观点
新东方网薛鹏思路拓展之传媒审查：
首段：
商业化的大众传媒充斥着对于各种犯罪以及暴力的生动描绘。许多现代游戏以大量的暴力元素吸引着玩家。很久以来, 关于电视和游戏暴力与日常生活中的暴力行为是否有关系的问题似乎一直存在争论。传媒中的暴力元素是否有害，仁者见仁。我认为，传媒中的暴力，血腥，色情等信息对于成长中的年轻人和社会都有不良的影响，因此，政府有责任加强传媒审查。
二段：支持传媒审查：
无疑，很多理由可以被探究来支持我的立场。第一，暴力游戏以及含有太多暴力元素的电影对于青少年的心理产生了不良的影响。可以想象，年轻人很好奇，模仿力很强，同时，他们很多人不能明辨是非，因此，过度接触到含有暴力元素的游戏和电影无疑会诱发他们的暴力冲动，误导他们人生观，因为暴力游戏和电影会潜移默化地毒害他们纯净的心灵。
第二，不良的电影视节目和有害的暴力游戏是造成街头暴力和校园欺凌的主要原因。数据显示模仿的犯罪行为有大幅度的增加，这证明电视暴力和暴力游戏是犯罪增加的一部分直接原因。第三，儿童和青少年接触到少儿不宜的信息， 例如恐怖和血腥的场面，会惊恐万分，恶梦不断。
三段：反对传媒审查：
有些制片人以及游戏开发商会顽固地为自己辩解说电视中的暴力镜头与生活中的暴力犯罪无关，仅是无害娱乐。有人也许认为：人性本善，不是所有接触过暴力游戏和影视的人都一定会犯罪。例如，有人就说，孩子们可能会对于卡通片中的暴力感到可笑，但是目睹到了生活中的真实暴力的时候又会感到不舒服。还有一种观点很流行：大部分青少年没有成长为暴力倾向者，比如，很多孩子喜欢功夫游戏，喜欢彼此打闹摔跤，但是，孩子们基本上是可以区分真实暴力和虚拟暴力。
尾段：
我认为让儿童或者青少年接触暴力节目和游戏几乎是一种犯罪行为。父母应该帮助孩子选择游戏和影视节目，父母应该考虑什么对于孩子们是适合的。
新东方网薛鹏原创范文赏析：
首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场
The commercialized mass media is usually besieged with vivid depiction of various criminal activities and violence. Many on-line games are now attracting many players via violent elements. People have been debating，for many years，whether or not it is necessary to strengthen the censorship of those violent games or films. To voice my opinion, stricter censorship code should be carried out to minimize harmful influence triggered by baneful information.
点评：首段背景介绍;清晰亮明作家立场
解析：be besieged with v 充斥着……
解析：stricter censorship code n严格的审查制度
解析：be implemented = be carried out v被执行
二段：正方观点展开(我的口吻)
Many reasons could be explored to justify my stand. First, excessive violent information on TV or computers games have a really adverse on the mentality of teenagers. Imaginably, so immature are some young viewers or teenage players that they tend to blindly imitate what they have seen on TV or computer games, even those violent behaviors, hence, the violent films or games will, to some extent, poison their innocent mind, mislead their life outlook and arouse their violent impulse. Also, allowing children to expose to violent films or games could make some young viewers feel frightened, or even give them nightmares. Last, film violence or game violence have led directly to rising crime, studies have shown that there is a dramatic rise in copycat crimes and such horrible consequences are usually caused by exposing to some adult-only videos and pornographic pictures.
解析：have a really adverse on …… v 对于……施加了不良的影响
解析：to some extent 在某种程度上
解析：expose …… to …… v 使接触到……
解析：studies have shown that ……研究显示……
解析：copycat crimes n 模拟犯罪
三段：反方观点展开 (他人口吻)
Others，however，might remain suspicious of my stand. From some computer game designers and film producers’ view, it won’t hurt to expose to those films or computer games containing violence. First, there is no relation between violence on films or games and real crimes of violence. Another argument hold by some people is that most of youngsters do not grow up to be aggressive because they could clearly know the distinction between real and unrealistic violence. Even some children like kung fu movies and violent games and might like to play at fighting each other, however, this does not lead to real crime, violent films or games are only harmless entertainment activities.
解析：Others，however，might remain suspicious of my stand. 然而，也许有人对于我的立场持有怀疑的态度
解析：it won’t hurt to do sth 做……是无害的
解析：Another argument hold by some people is that …… 还有人持有一种观点
解析：are only harmless entertainment activities 仅仅是无害的娱乐
尾段：再次亮明观点
Overall, my stand is that it is almost a crime to expose children to violence, pornography or criminal activities on TV or the Internet. It is imperative for the government to strengthen the censorship of the negative mass media.
解析：it is almost a crime to do sth 做……几乎是一种犯罪
解析：It is imperative for the government to do sth v 政府做……是势在必行
拓展： The government should be urged to do sth v 政府应该做……
作者介绍：
薛鹏，新东方网专栏作家，吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历)，前长春新东方功勋教师，多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作7.5分，托福写作29分)。
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